I didn't really believe that Don was just throwing in his paid members' ideas and wants for the story, it happens a lot and I had hoped that Don wasn't truly going there as I read each month. However, I now agree with you guys. Using Otis is exactly what they kept demanding and having the baby be an unknown father kind of thing as now three different guys have fucked her bareback, 2 most likely fertile and one snipped and shooting blanks. How many more will Don throw Sarah at in order to muddy the waters of the pregnancy. There really is no good reason for this to happen at all and considering the story was not about just Dan and Sarah , it included Lester. Everyone else who Sarah slept with should be nothing but a literary tool and nothing else, but that is no longer happening. I am not angry over it, just incredibly disappointed.
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Very stale and stagnant chapter but sort of expected from DS nowadays. The characters are not the only ones that got corrupted during the unravelling of this story. The author also got corrupted by greed somewhere down the line. Could've been a short and interesting story of seduction and corruption but got dragged into below ordinary status due to his greed. Sad! (Just my personal opinion so pls don't go ballistic on me 
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)I fear that's the route we're going down. I predict that once she goes off birth control, she'll be fucking Lester and at least two others. Then Lester will get killed/Jailed. With him out of the picture, Sarah and Dan will recover their relationship and raise the baby without ever checking who the father is.
Instead of an intimate narrative around the three initial characters we've invested dozens of chapters in, the story will descend into a generic cuckold/slut tale. Which is an absolute disgrace to the first dozen chapters which are the best erotic content I've ever read
Instead of an intimate narrative around the three initial characters we've invested dozens of chapters in, the story will descend into a generic cuckold/slut tale. Which is an absolute disgrace to the first dozen chapters which are the best erotic content I've ever read
I've been telling you this for months. It became a shit story. Some undercover DS cheerleaders made fun of me because I said it.
This DS is a one story writer. He doesn't know what to do with it. It's been a long time since he had an original idea. He works for 800 people who pay him to write what they want.
This DS is a one story writer. He doesn't know what to do with it. It's been a long time since he had an original idea. He works for 800 people who pay him to write what they want.
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Btw, I don't know if any of you here have read Neighbor Chronicles and the spin offs that have been inspired by it but I think DS has made a reference to that story in this chapter
"The other prey was someone, funnily enough, Dan had helped Lester track down. The wife of a business associate of his. Lester had overheard Dan’s meeting with this guy from some marketing company. Lester scanned the file. Bill, was the man’s name ... She was in a bathing suit, at some pool party held at what he deduced was their house. She had very similar portions to Sarah. This Amber woman would be quite the delicious treat. "
Neighbor Chronicles is about a married man (Bill) who lets his wife (Amber) fuck their fat neighbor (Jack). They have a pool in their house. In one of the spin offs, there's a chapter where a "Chester" fucks Amber.
"The other prey was someone, funnily enough, Dan had helped Lester track down. The wife of a business associate of his. Lester had overheard Dan’s meeting with this guy from some marketing company. Lester scanned the file. Bill, was the man’s name ... She was in a bathing suit, at some pool party held at what he deduced was their house. She had very similar portions to Sarah. This Amber woman would be quite the delicious treat. "
Neighbor Chronicles is about a married man (Bill) who lets his wife (Amber) fuck their fat neighbor (Jack). They have a pool in their house. In one of the spin offs, there's a chapter where a "Chester" fucks Amber.
You will find another reference to Lester in Neighborly Chronicles AU - Pt. 14, except he is named Chester.
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Yeah, that's what I was referring to. I think it's pretty clear he was referencing those stories. Curious to see if it's just an Easter egg or if we'll see further developments down the line
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Guys, for Sarah to get pregnant, she has to stop taking her medicine. Lester was off-screen for a long time in this chapter. Dan and Sarah's dialogue was cool, it was touching and his pillar. However, Dan has been without intimacy with his wife for a long time. I didn't like that he didn't participate with Otis. He doesn't take the initiative, something that can change. 2 - Dom can use Lester and tell his adventures with other women. (ask your subscribers). 3- I understand that things take time to happen. I want to see the story of antarctica77 (Lisa chapters 4 and 5) to see how the corruption is going. Dom has to see what the public wants and create a new story. Adapted to the writing.
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Hay I just read 14,15,16 of " my neighbor" and I really didn't like how the story unfolded at the last few chapters but I liked how it all ended.
Spoiler alert ( I don't know how to make it blurry) but in the end it all worked out. John moved out and decided to go France with Emily and while he's at home packing a bag the law shoes up to arrest Louise.
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I have to disagree with most of the comments about TA CH28.
- the chapter was fuckly HOT.
- usage of Otis perfect. Otis has exploited a situation, in perfect agreement with the character. That he could have fucked Sarah with the right chance was obvious from Sarah response in the other chapter. This scene wouldn’t have been possible with Lester of course. But with Dan it makes totally sense.
- Lester management is absolutely consistent with the character. He runs business on the dark web, surely cannot be so clean…he couldn’t be indefinitely at the hospital, going away form the hospital, at some point, was the only possible outcome. At least if you want to give to the story a minimum of “suspension of disbelief”.
- Dan is totally crazy character now. We now know for sure is fixed(this is the first time it is clearly stated), and he doesn’t ask his wife if she is safe in that point of her cycle or not? Wtf?!?!?? He would have asked her and she would have stated she is on the pill…
- Guys you have to understand that Dan-Sarah-Lester ended when the focus has gone from Chicago home involving other people. At least if you want to have a story with a minimum of “suspension of disbelief”.
- the chapter was fuckly HOT.
- usage of Otis perfect. Otis has exploited a situation, in perfect agreement with the character. That he could have fucked Sarah with the right chance was obvious from Sarah response in the other chapter. This scene wouldn’t have been possible with Lester of course. But with Dan it makes totally sense.
- Lester management is absolutely consistent with the character. He runs business on the dark web, surely cannot be so clean…he couldn’t be indefinitely at the hospital, going away form the hospital, at some point, was the only possible outcome. At least if you want to give to the story a minimum of “suspension of disbelief”.
- Dan is totally crazy character now. We now know for sure is fixed(this is the first time it is clearly stated), and he doesn’t ask his wife if she is safe in that point of her cycle or not? Wtf?!?!?? He would have asked her and she would have stated she is on the pill…
- Guys you have to understand that Dan-Sarah-Lester ended when the focus has gone from Chicago home involving other people. At least if you want to have a story with a minimum of “suspension of disbelief”.
He promised that at some point he would do cross over stuff because he already had Avid's permission to do so.
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That chapter could have been much more than just HOT .it could have been great instead of usual erotica that uread once and forget
I don't even pay for Netflix but I was ready to pay for this bcuz I saw huge potential here .
Now it's just another loving wives story albeit a good one but it could have been the best . Just saying
Don't worry.
There's space for every taste.
I loved this story until chapter 10 or 12.
After that, it became, in my opinion, a dull combination of repetitive situations with no direction home.
But it's clear that a lot of people loved it more because of the last 15 chapters. And they are not wrong at all.
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I liked the fact that Louise bought up ' wife sharing ' as an option here . Even though it's used to indicate how much Louise fell off
The happiest ending i imagine for TA is Lester and Dan agreeing to share 'Sarah ' in a proper way.
Reason: Lester has fallen for her and can't go through with his original plan ,Sarah realizes she loves both men for different yet valid reasons .
Dan owning up to his mistakes and acknowledging his fetishes and taking control
Lester can learn to take baths and hygeine .Dan can learn how to take care of his family and his cuckold kicks . Sarah gets to have the best of both worlds .
Did anyone share Executive Priveleges 3 here? I didn't see any link here? Would be helpful if someone could post the link for that too.
When I hit the Kemono link, I just get a blank page. What am I doing wrong? My apologies for not being tech savvy.
My issue is just that the title was Toxic Attraction. Now, I understand that my background and education urges me to think that titles are important doorways to the story, a heads-up, if you will. Just as soon as you have Sarah sleeping with everyone who might have a dick in Metro Chicago and its suburbs it is no longer about one toxic attraction. You could say perhaps Don should change the name to Toxic Attractions instead. Well, in that case, let him, because then I will know, as a reader that this is not the same story. As has already been stated here, Don can write great erotica, but this was not just supposed to be that, it was supposed to be a larger encompassing story, with a title that showed us what it was all about. That is why my expectations are having issues being met and the only reason. That is, once again, only my humble opinion.
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